Page 8 - Connection Error

12th Apr 2017, 8:00 AM in XANA Awakens
Page 8 - Connection Error
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MagicMixture 12th Apr 2017, 8:00 AM edit delete
This is the page where I tried a bunch of new things at once, and I have mixed feelings about them.

1: connecting speech bubbles. Not sure if I like it. Probably won't use it again unless I REALLY need to.

2: a different comic layout. I kind of like it even if it was a pain to figure out.

3: making the speech bubbles smooth inside. They look sooooo much better. Now if only I could figure out how to make them smooth on the outside.

By the way, speech bubbles with tails mean that someone is consciously speaking in character. Sometimes the GM will take an out-of-character moment and have it happen in the game like the last page to move things along. Can't have the players thinking they're safe if it's "out-of-character."


GM (???): Since I don’t have a name, maybe you can name me?
Stein (Jeremie): Uh, okay. How’s AI?
GM (???): That doesn’t sound like a real name.
Stein (Jeremie): Hmm. . . Maya?
GM (???): Maya? I like it!
Stein (Jeremie): If you can see me, can you see what’s around you? What are your surroundings?
GM (Maya): I see a lot of binary code. And I’m on some. . . circular platform, and there’s a path heading towards a wall.
Stein (Jeremie): You see more than code? Weird. Is there something behind the wall?
GM (Maya): I’m not—wha?
GM: And then you hear nothing.
Eric: Is she dead?
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