Page 358 - Stubborn as a Mule

24th Dec 2018, 6:00 PM in Image Problem
Page 358 - Stubborn as a Mule
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MagicMixture 24th Dec 2018, 6:00 PM edit delete
MagicMixture
I feel like this entire page got needlessly complicated, but it's the best I could do. I hope I never need to overlap speech bubbles like this again. If this arrangement confuses people, I apologize.

Transcript

Rachel (Yumi?): Jeremie. We need to go to the factory. Now.
Stein (Jeremie): I don't think so. We still have classes, and you especially need to rest.
Rachel (Yumi?): You are as stubborn as a fool.
Stein (Jeremie): It's "stubborn as a mule." And that just proves my point; you are not well enough to go to Lyoko.
Rachel (Yumi?): You're right. And I know the reason why.
Stein (Jeremie): Oh really? Then please explain.
[Yumi? places a hand on Jeremie’s shoulder.]
<PAT>
Rachel (Yumi?): It's you.
Stein: Huh?
Rachel (Yumi?): It took me almost dying to see it, but I've realized what I nearly missed out on.
Ian: Hahaha! She’s flirting? With Jeremie?!
Stein: I, uh, this is unexpected. What are—?
Rachel (Yumi?): Ah-ah. Not another word. Let's go to the factory and. . . I'll make it worth your while.
Ian (quietly): Hmhmhm! Holy hell.
Stein: This is XANA talking, right?
[Yumi? removes Jeremie’s glasses from his face.]
<LIFT>
Taylor: Uh. . . you don't need to actually do that.
Stein: I need those to see.
Rachel (Yumi?): Is that why you have to hide a lovely pair of eyes?
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Comments:

Wildwolf42 25th Dec 2018, 11:06 PM edit delete reply
Wildwolf42
Overlapping can be useful, don't worry about it. You can use it to show that someone's interrupting, for example.
Anvildude 26th Dec 2018, 1:30 PM edit delete reply
Works fine for me. You keep to a standard format, so no issues reading it.
Guest 26th Jan 2019, 8:38 PM edit delete reply
No problem reading it, so it's fine i think.
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