Page 36 - One Small Step for Man

22nd May 2017, 8:00 AM in XANA Awakens
Page 36 - One Small Step for Man
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MagicMixture 22nd May 2017, 8:00 AM edit delete
MagicMixture
That is nothing like a sarcophagus! I would've sooner thought I was seeing some alien tech than an ancient tomb! Do all those wires mean nothing to you?!

Sorry. I just... that is unbelievable. I swear I don't remember her being this dumb.

Now, question for you guys. I'm worried that we might lose track of how many life points a virtual being has. I find that if I read one page a day, I lose track of things. Should I write the number of HP somewhere in the comic or in the author's note, or should I not write it at all? This is up to you guys.

Transcript

Taylor: Jeremie begins the virtualization sequence. At that moment, Kiwi jumps out of your arms, and the scanner doors close.
Taylor (Sissi): Oh no! You’re going to be mummified!
Ian: . . . I don’t think I described the scanner well.
Stein: Uh, do we know that Odd’s the one being scanned?
Taylor: You do now. On the computer is an avatar that definitely does not look like a dog.
Stein: Oh, crap! Can I stop the program?
Taylor: You can try, but you risk trapping Odd between reality and virtual reality.
Stein: I. . . I let the program finish.
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Rastaba 22nd May 2017, 12:56 PM edit delete reply
Rastaba
I would suggest just putting the numbers over the character when it becomes relevant like in their color either over their head or at the point of 'impact' if you are lucky enough to get that shot.

That or a final 'tally' at the end of each page of how many points each hero has left.
Wildwolf42 3rd Jun 2017, 8:03 AM edit delete reply
Wildwolf42
Im a bit late answering this... :c
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