Page 333 - Awkward Turtles

24th Sep 2018, 8:00 AM in Cruel Dilemma
Page 333 - Awkward Turtles
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MagicMixture 24th Sep 2018, 8:00 AM edit delete
Oh boy. Is there ANY hope for these people?


Ian: Hey ya. How you holding up?
Stein: Will I be able to recover any data from the program before it is overwritten?
Ian: Ask Taylor; I don't know. Anyway, Madeline wants to talk to you.
Madeline: . . .
Stein: . . .
Ian: Oookay. I'll leave you two be.
Stein & Madeline: . . . I'm sorry.
Stein & Madeline: Huh?
Madeline: Why are you apologizing? I-I mean, I'm the one who ran ahead and caused us to lose everything.
Stein: That doesn't give me the right to be a hypocrite. After all my talk earlier, you'd think I'd remember that you would be more sensitive to brash comments.
Stein: Wait. That's not to say that you're fragile or anything.
Stein: I should've just handled you with better care.
Stein: No, wait! I mean I can't treat you as I typically do with others.
Stein: No, no, that's the same thing! What I meant was-!
Stein: <inhale> Can I start over?
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Rastaba 24th Sep 2018, 8:52 AM edit delete reply
There is always hope...just ask that Pandora lady. She had to scrape the bottom of the box to find it, but it’s always there! Even if it is nothing more than foolish hope, it is still there.
Guest 26th Sep 2018, 4:26 AM edit delete reply
After this, I'd be waiting outside the scanners with a shotgun... Or... really any weapon I could get my hands on. It's... There's no way Xana wouldn't take advantage of having access to the program to set up guards outside the factory.
Guest 4th Nov 2018, 5:24 PM edit delete reply
i'm not sure. Xana first have to see if the programm could be used to materialize something that is'nt human. It was made to materialize Aelita, so i don't know if it can use it to materialise some megatank or a Kankrelat in the real world. and it doe'st seem like he have any humanoid thing on hand in Lyoko.
Vanacan 26th Sep 2018, 6:36 AM edit delete reply
You’re doing a really good job of making me ship these two, even compared to the original story! Doubly impressive since they’re clearly distinct from the shows characters.
MagicMixture 26th Sep 2018, 7:05 AM edit delete reply
AAHHHH! Thank you! I'm not even good at writing romance so this is a huge compliment. :)
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