Page 317 - Now Mostly Safe

22nd Aug 2018, 8:00 AM in Cruel Dilemma
Page 317 - Now Mostly Safe
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MagicMixture 22nd Aug 2018, 8:00 AM edit delete
In the original scene, Yumi and Ulrich both ran away from the bulldozer, and that always bugged me as a kid. I mean, Ulrich was unconscious, then wakes up long enough to run, and then passes out again? Admittedly, yes, he could've regained consciousness in that time frame and the exertion would've knocked him back out, but. . . Adrenaline or not, you're not going to be able to immediately start running the moment you wake up!


Taylor: The bulldozer rumbles past your hiding spot, unaware of you for the moment.
Rachel: Good. How does the elevator look?
Taylor: The elevator had been hit before you arrived and looks a little. . . unstable.
Taylor: Speaking of which, Eric, roll this die to see if you can stabilize yourself.
Eric: That can't be good. Can Yumi help?
Rachel: Yeah, but I'd rather wait until you're in a safe area. Well, safer.
Taylor: There's a hole where a trap door had been, exposing a. . . secret passage.
Rachel: Convenient. I'll slip in with Ulrich when the bulldozers are facing elsewhere.
Taylor: You successfully escaped.
Taylor: There's a greenish light at the end of the hall which you recognize is from the lab level.
Rachel: Welp, carrying time. And I'll call Jeremie to help us.
Taylor: Listen Check, Stein, with -1 from the ruckus upstairs.
Stein: At least we don't have to worry about the bulldozers running us over.
Taylor: Just as you say that, a whole bunch of debris falls from the ceiling.
Andy: Dude.
Stein: Don't give me that look!
Andy: . . . Dude.
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Cloy552 22nd Aug 2018, 7:53 PM edit delete reply
Talking about the situation always makes it worse. ALWAYS
Rastaba 22nd Aug 2018, 10:23 PM edit delete reply
Guest 1st Nov 2018, 6:48 PM edit delete reply
don't taunt fate. ever
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