Page 313 - Keep Dodging!

16th Aug 2018, 8:00 AM in Cruel Dilemma
Page 313 - Keep Dodging!
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MagicMixture 16th Aug 2018, 8:00 AM edit delete
MagicMixture
I still have not gotten a rhythm for fight scenes. I feel like this page was punching me in the face while I tried to make it. Why are action scenes so difficult to compose?!

Life Points
Odd: 20 HP
Aelita: 15 HP

Transcript

Madeline: Um, I'll stay behind Odd.
Andy: Alright, which roachster wants to go first?
Taylor: The one to your left.
[Odd jumps in the air to avoid a laser.]
<DODGE>
Andy: Whoa! No need to rush. I'll get to all of you.
Taylor: Second one.
Andy: Dang it.
[A kankrelat shoots Odd. Odd loses 10 HP.]
Taylor: Third one coming up.
Andy: Cat's Grace!
Stein: You don't have that spell.
Andy: Didn't even need it! 20!
[Odd flips out of the way.]
<SPRING>
Rachel: . . . Shit.
Taylor: Oh for the love of - Will you guys quit it with the swearing?
Eric: Sorry.
Rachel: Hmph.
Taylor: By the way, when Odd jumped out of the way, the laser hit Aelita.
[Aelita loses 10 HP.]
Madeline: Ow?
Stein: Andy. . .
Andy: Eh heh. My bad.
Taylor: And it's Odd's turn.
Andy: Dive back behind Aelita, and double arrows for you, roachie!
[Odd fires two laser arrows, hitting a kankrelat and exploding it.]
<PEW! PEW!>
<BOOM!>
Andy: Yes!
Stein: Keep in mind that Aelita doesn't have any defenses.
Andy: You know this isn't as easy as I make it look?
Madeline: It-It's fine. I'm fine.
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Comments:

Cloy552 16th Aug 2018, 2:02 PM edit delete reply
There's nothing wrong with swearing!
Guest 1st Nov 2018, 6:22 PM edit delete reply
don't get in a argument, you're making maddie nervous !
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