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26th Jul 2018, 8:00 AM in Cruel Dilemma
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MagicMixture 26th Jul 2018, 8:00 AM edit delete
MagicMixture
So I noticed that I'm following a similar formula to Taylor and Eric's talk. First, a distressed person needs to leave, and another follows them. The one who followed tries to get the distressed person to open up which is then followed by a rant/monologue with great emotion. Then the other person acts to make the first comfortable and to earn their trust. Finally, they'll head back to the game just as trouble comes around.

I'll have to mix up this formula every now and then.
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Vanacan 27th Jul 2018, 6:57 AM edit delete reply
I mean it’s a good formulae. It works, there’s nothing wrong with sticking to the basics when telling a story. As long as the minutia aren’t carbon copies you can still use it.

Thanks for returning too! Glad to have you back,
MagicMixture 27th Jul 2018, 12:50 PM edit delete reply
MagicMixture
You make a good point. And thank you! Glad to be back.
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