Page 238 - Too Much Pressure

26th Jan 2018, 8:00 AM in Holiday In the Fog
Page 238 - Too Much Pressure
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MagicMixture 26th Jan 2018, 8:00 AM edit delete
Sometimes you want a little space to yourself, yet you want to hear the company of others. That's why Madeline didn't completely disconnect. She can see and hear the others, but not vice versa.

Also it's really hard to type properly when your hands are shaking.

Next page on Monday. Have a good weekend!


Taylor: Okay, I’m cool. I’m calm. Sorry about that, Madeline.
Taylor: Madeline?
Eric: Did she shut her laptop again?
Taylor: No, we’re still connected. I think she just shut off her webcam.
Ian: Probably her microphone, too.
Rachel: . . .
Taylor: She’ll be back when she’s ready. Um, anyway, Eric and Ian, saves against poison damage, please?
Taylor: Sissi’s good for one more round.
Andy: How are you still alive, Ian?
Ian: Jim’s been through worse. But, uh, he’s not going to last much longer.
Eric: Guess I’m the first to actually die, huh?
Taylor’s Cell Phone: <BZZT>
Taylor: Not quite, Eric.
Madeline Text: towehr dactiv
Stein: Thank you. I set the flood program to take us back 48 hours.
Taylor: It’s a success.
[Fade to white.]
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Cloy552 27th Jan 2018, 6:30 PM edit delete reply
While I understand the feeling of being annoyed when something isn't following the rules Madeline did nothing wrong and deserves... well normally I'd say a hug but she might not want that maybe a... plushy?
MagicMixture 27th Jan 2018, 11:22 PM edit delete reply
Dude, she would totally love plushies!

And certainly, Madeline didn't do anything wrong; Aelita was made long before she joined. She's probably somewhat aware that Rachel isn't specifically mad at her, but witnessing any kind of fight scares her.
Guest 12th Jun 2018, 5:41 PM edit delete reply
also as someone pointed in a previous page, her creation power are powerfull, but on the other hand she have no attack and can't defend herself.
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